This week we had to use our language features for our writing which is definitely something I need to work on since I rarely use them, I t I did have to try to remember everything throughout the sto.
My story.
“The big wide white house no one enters, ” they say, “ it’s a non living house only with the dead that lives through the creeks of the house”. Rumours spread all along the town, not a normal town though, “these people here are not normal, they shiver nonstop yelling, crying for help, they seem as if they have seen a ghost. But Burn and Lean is not so far as affected as the people, it’s kinda like a virus” Burn says. They travel in motorcycles with cool leather jackets. we are here at their destination, ‘The big wide white house. Lean’s fear hits not knowing how scary this house is, “ It’s just like those haunted house stories” Lean says. The clouds gathering into a storm, the web overtaking the whole house. The rot spreads through the concrete walls, a creepy living doll looking through the top window on the roof of the house, “but so, it’s imaginary, it’s not actually there.. I think.” Lean says with fright. Burn is not as scared as Lean walking into the house without a fear in his bright hazel eyes. They enter. A cold breath haunts them. The smell of this rotten fish smell “so excotic but disgusting it’s hard to explain”. Burn says. A haunting whisper crawling through leans air, may be quiet but loud. Lean is scared but continues to stay brave for the team! Burn disappears into another room which scares Lean for a second. A sacred chest Burn finds.. “A real mystery this house is, huh? Right Lean?” burn says. “Ye-yeah ha!….” says lean. “Oh look there’s a basement let’s go check what’s in there, that will surely be a mystery!” says burn.